--- trunk/iceiPaper/iceiPaper.tex	2004/09/16 21:38:10	1469
+++ trunk/iceiPaper/iceiPaper.tex	2004/09/16 23:40:02	1470
@@ -463,13 +463,20 @@ i} at a temperature of 77K.  We will leave it to our e
 non-polar molecules.  Figs. \ref{fig:gofr} and \ref{fig:sofq} contain
 our predictions for both the pair distribution function ($g_{OO}(r)$)
 and the structure factor ($S(\vec{q})$ for ice $I_c$ and for ice-{\it
-i} at a temperature of 77K.  We will leave it to our experimental
-colleagues to determine whether this ice polymorph is named
-appropriately or if it should be promoted to Ice-0.
+i} at a temperature of 77K.  In a quick comparison of the predicted
+S(q) for Ice-{\it i} and experimental studies of amorphous solid
+water, it is possible that some of the ``spurious'' peaks that could
+not be assigned in HDA could correspond to peaks labeled in this
+S(q).\cite{Bizid87} It should be noted that there is typically poor
+agreement on crystal densities between simulation and experiment, so
+such peak comparisons should be made with caution.  We will leave it
+to our experimental colleagues to determine whether this ice polymorph
+is named appropriately or if it should be promoted to Ice-0.
 
 \begin{figure}
 \includegraphics[width=\linewidth]{iceGofr.eps}
-\caption{Radial distribution functions of (A) Ice-{\it i} and (B) ice $I_c$ at 77 K from simulations of the SSD/RF water model.}
+\caption{Radial distribution functions of Ice-{\it i} and ice $I_c$ 
+calculated from from simulations of the SSD/RF water model at 77 K.}
 \label{fig:gofr}
 \end{figure}
 
@@ -477,8 +484,10 @@ instrument function (0.075 \AA$^{-1}$ width) to compen
 \includegraphics[width=\linewidth]{sofq.eps}
 \caption{Predicted structure factors for Ice-{\it i} and ice $I_c$ at
 77 K.  The raw structure factors have been convoluted with a gaussian
-instrument function (0.075 \AA$^{-1}$ width) to compensate
-for the trunction effects in our finite size simulations.}
+instrument function (0.075 \AA$^{-1}$ width) to compensate for the
+trunction effects in our finite size simulations. The labeled peaks
+compared favorably with ``spurious'' peaks observed in experimental
+studies of amorphous solid water.\cite{Bizid87}}
 \label{fig:sofq}
 \end{figure}
 
