--- trunk/langevinHull/langevinHull.tex	2010/11/15 16:24:08	3690
+++ trunk/langevinHull/langevinHull.tex	2010/11/15 16:46:53	3693
@@ -660,26 +660,10 @@ In the absence of an electrostatic contribution from t
 to molecules with oxygen directed toward the exterior of the cluster,
 forming a dangling hydrogen bond acceptor site.
 
-In the absence of an electrostatic contribution from the exterior
-bath, the orientational distribution of water molecules included in
-the Langevin Hull will slightly resemble the distribution at a neat
-water liquid/vapor interface.  Previous molecular dynamics simulations
-of SPC/E water \cite{Taylor1996} have shown that molecules at the
-liquid/vapor interface favor an orientation where one hydrogen
-protrudes from the liquid phase. This behavior is demonstrated by
-experiments \cite{Du1994} \cite{Scatena2001} showing that
-approximately one-quarter of water molecules at the liquid/vapor
-interface form dangling hydrogen bonds. The negligible preference
-shown in these cluster simulations could be removed through the
-introduction of an implicit solvent model, which would provide the
-missing electrostatic interactions between the cluster molecules and
-the surrounding temperature/pressure bath.
+Previous molecular dynamics simulations
+of SPC/E water that use periodic boundary conditions have shown that molecules on the liquid side of the liquid/vapor interface favor a similar orientation where oxygen is directed away from the bulk.\cite{Taylor1996} These simulations had both a liquid phase and a well-defined vapor phase in equilibrium and showed that vapor molecules generally had one hydrogen protruding from the surface, forming a dangling hydrogen bond donor. Our water cluster simulations do not have a true lasting vapor phase, but rather a few transient molecules that leave the liquid droplet. Thus we are unable to comment on the orientational preference of vapor phase molecules in a Langevin Hull simulation.
 
-The orientational preference exhibited by hull molecules in the
-Langevin hull is significantly weaker than the preference caused by an
-explicit hydrophobic bounding potential.  Additionally, the Langevin
-Hull does not require that the orientation of any molecules be fixed
-in order to maintain bulk-like structure, even at the cluster surface.
+However, the orientational preference exhibited by liquid phase hull molecules in the Langevin hull is significantly weaker than the preference caused by an explicit hydrophobic bounding potential.  Additionally, the Langevin Hull does not require that the orientation of any molecules be fixed in order to maintain bulk-like structure, even at the cluster surface.
 
 \subsection{Heterogeneous nanoparticle / water mixtures}