--- trunk/tengDissertation/Appendix.tex	2006/06/23 21:33:52	2882
+++ trunk/tengDissertation/Appendix.tex	2006/06/25 17:39:42	2883
@@ -114,11 +114,11 @@ Parameterized Factory pattern where factory method (
 the problem of creating objects without specifying the exact class
 of object that will be created. Factory method is typically
 implemented by delegating the creation operation to the subclasses.
-Parameterized Factory pattern where factory method (
-createIntegrator member function) creates products based on the
-identifier (see Scheme.~\ref{appendixScheme:factoryDeclaration}). If
-the identifier has been already registered, the factory method will
-invoke the corresponding creator (see
+One of the most popular Factory pattern is Parameterized Factory
+pattern which creates products based on their identifiers (see
+Scheme.~\ref{appendixScheme:factoryDeclaration}). If the identifier
+has been already registered, the factory method will invoke the
+corresponding creator (see
 Scheme.~\ref{appendixScheme:integratorCreator}) which utilizes the
 modern C++ template technique to avoid excess subclassing.
 
