--- trunk/tengDissertation/phdPreamble.tex	2006/06/22 22:19:02	2880
+++ trunk/tengDissertation/phdPreamble.tex	2006/06/28 17:36:32	2904
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ like membrane,liquid crystal and polymers \emph{etc}. 
 As an rapidly expanding interdisciplinary of physics, chemistry and
 biology \emph{etc}, soft condensed matter science studies the
 kinetics, dynamics and geometric structures of complex materials
-like membrane,liquid crystal and polymers \emph{etc}. These soft
+like membrane, liquid crystal and polymers \emph{etc}. These soft
 condensed matters are distinguished by the unique physical
 properties on the mesoscopic scale which can provide useful insights
 to understand the basic physical principles linking the microscopic
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ dissertation to describe phosphlipids and banana-shape
 current computing power. In order to simulate large soft condensed
 systems for long times within a reasonable amount of computational
 time, some new coarse-grained models were proposed in this
-dissertation to describe phosphlipids and banana-shaped liquid
+dissertation to describe phospholipids and banana-shaped liquid
 crystals. Although these models can be described using a small
 number of physical parameter, it is not trivial to maintain the
 introducing rigid constraints between different molecular fragments
